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Return To The Portrait

Return To The Portait self-critique

As with everything I make, not all of my decisions seem as good to me now as they did at the time. I'm still proud of RTTP, but I see several flaws with it.

My memory from so long ago is murky, but I think I was motivated to do a lot of this by feeling a need to 'add tension' or something, and didn't realize I was actually taking it away.

Accepted plotholes

These are things I gave up on finding satisfactory answers to. I'll point them out myself just for interest's sake.

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